'I have accepted your story. By the way have you any of 2,500 words in hand, as that is the length we are most in need of just now. If so, I shall be glad to give you a speedy decision on any you care to submit.'
'I have accepted your story. By the way have you any of 2,500 words in hand, as that is the length we are most in need of just now. If so, I shall be glad to give you a speedy decision on any you care to submit.'
Addressed: Mount House, Chartham nr. Canterbury. Signed.
'I don't know Mr Flower at Harmsworth's ... I am much obliged for the hint I am afraid, howver, it is not much in my line as I don't care to write very short stories. I certainly think you might do something with the Mr. Griffith I mentioned in my letter.. he is one of Mr Edward’s subs... but he has charge of the 'Marvel' and 'Pluck'. He is much taken up with Clark Hook, but he has room for a good deal outside that. The way to go to work would be to take him a good opening of some sort 3000 or 4000 words, with a synopsis of what is to follow. Then, if he likes it, he will tell you what length to extend it – whether 10,000, 17,000 or 21,000 at 10/- per 1000. I should go straight in to him with my card (enclosed) and have a shot. His room is on the 2nd floor – same as Mr. Back. Go past Back’s office, right to the end, turn to left and go to the end again and you will see the door of his room facing you. He’s a very decent little fellow. Reverting to the Aldine people do I understand that they pay cash on delivery? Suppose I were to do a 24,000 story would they pay for it as soon as they had read it & accepted it, or only when it was published? ... I ask this because I understood you to say that they pay prompt cash... but I did not quite understand whether that meant on publication or on acceptance. ...I've got a lot of stuff out now unpaid for, waiting to be published so much that I'm getting rather sick of it. I can go on adding to it - I have no difficulty in getting the stuff accepted - but where's the use when you never know when on earth it's goign to be paid for? Since I wrote to you I have heard that Mr. Langton Townley is still in 'Puck' office – i.e. over Mr. Sisley’s. As I said you can mention my name if you go to see him.’
Note : both Atkins and Back (editor, above) are mentioned in Lofts and Adley. Edwards is Hamilton Edwards and Griffiths, Percy Griffiths – both A.P. editors.
Thanking Allingham for the manuscript of 'Duffer & Co.'
'Since this story was arranged for I have taken over the Editorship of T Blue and I understand from my brother that the question of price has not yet been settled. I have gone carefully into the matter and have decided that, if you are prepared to carry on the series for at least three more tales I can pay you the sum of £8 each for them. This is the utmost I can do....
I have had the m.s. and like it. It appears to me, however, to lack movement in the opening chapters and while I of course appreciate the difficulties which have to be met on the commencement of a new series, I think an incident could be introduced near the opening of the tale.'
'pay me what you like for it (but make it as high as you can). If it suits you and I think it will we can have a chat about further work. With best wishes for success of T.B/ Yours sincerely HJA'
'Thanks for 'Duffer Story'. I have read it and it sees all right. I don't think it would do any harm to have the mystery of a more serious nature than the theft of a necklace of which a [?] girl is accused. I don't mean a murder, which would be [?], but a great crime of which all the world might be talking and in which the whole of Scotland Yard might be engaged.The Duffer would of course take up the matter, and might be constantly [?] the endeavours of the Police by some silly [?]. This would give a chance for some comic stuff between the Duffer and the police and in the end the Duffer would of course stumble on the right clue. I make these suggestions for the next story (which will do quite well in 3 weeks) the present one is all right. Keep up the comic stuff as much as possible. Will send cheque on.'
Headed notepaper: Editorial Department, 2 Carmelite House, Carmelite Street, London EC. Signed.
Editor-in-Chief of Boy’s Friend, Boys’ Herald, Boys’ Realm, Girls’ World, Woman’s World, Jester, Union Jack, Pluck Library, Marvel Library
'Herewith I am returning to you the synopsis and first instalment of a school story entitled 'Max, The Magnificent'. I regret that my opinion concerning this story, although it is fairly favourable, does not warrant me in commissioning you to do it. My reasons for this are, first; that the story although fairly good, is not strong enough; secondly, that I have a very large amount of school story matter on hand so that I should not be justified in asking you to go on with this one.'
'The story 'In Cupid's aid' is still on hand, and at present I am afraid I can give you no idea when it will be published. A great many stories were accepted just after the paper was started, and I fear it will be a good many months before we are able to work them off.'
Editor-in-Chief of Boy’s Friend, Boys’ Herald, Boys’ Realm, Girls’ World, Woman’s World, Jester, Union Jack, Pluck Library, Marvel Library
'I am very much obliged to you for your letter of the 8th and desire to inform you that your story 'Two Chums and Oldfields' has been accepted and will be published in due course. If, as you say, you could invent for me a character of which my readers would never tire, I can only reply that I would welcome you with open arms. Anyway, send me something which I may consider, and if it promises anything half so brilliant as th claim which you make I shall be only too glad to make use of it.'
‘In reply to yours, all our stories whether short or serial are original. We do not care about secondhand stuff. We are sorry you have given up short story writing. We should have thought there was more scope in that than serial work, but of course, you are the best judge of your own capabilities.
P.S. Even if it had been original I'm afraid your 'Devil of a Woman' is a little bit too Mephistophelean for our guileless readers.'
'The Fiction Editor regrets that he is unalbe to make use of the enclosed contribution, for the kind offer of which he is greatly obliged. He is always pleased to consider stories ranging from 1,500 to 200,000 words in length, and when suitable makes a speedy and substantial offer for the same.'
Hand-written message ‘Very good but unfortunately we have had (and have) too many stories dealing with European – Zenda-ish princes. Please let me hear from you again with something after the style of our London Magazine and Answers short stories. Many thanks.'